Wikipedia:Peer review/Armenian cuisine

The article Cuisine of Armenia has been substantially revised, with many new inputs added (as of 1 August 2008). Comments and suggestions for further improvements are invited. --Zlerman (talk) 10:49, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Peer review
It seems that many good contributions have been made tot he article, however, much of the article is a list of dishes which are a component of a cuisine and not the cuisine itself. I suggest a look into the history of the cuisine, dating back as far as possible, also a section on dining customs and etiquette would be nice. I'd also like to see a section on restaurants and any information on significant chefs, alcohol and other beverages should be included as well. When this information is presented it should be in a narrative format as well, not as a list as is seen many times in cuisine articles. I suggest a look at French cuisine, Italian cuisine, and Korean cuisine. Also the history section of Japanese cuisine and Cuisine of the United States.--Chef Tanner (talk) 15:41, 1 August 2008 (UTC)