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Artificial urinary bladder
Hi, I am User:4dhayman and I started this article under the name "artificial bladder". I know this article is very far from FA status, but I'd like some input on how I may develop this article further. I am relatively new as a user, but please don't respond to my request with derision.

Thank you very much,

4dhayman 22:12, 19 February 2007 (UTC)


 * How long were the teams working on the bladder technique before they announced its success? Who was involved?  Does the procedure section refer to the dog team or the later teams?  What kind of risks are there involved?  Do the new bladders have the same function as a natural bladder?  (ie. no readsorption side effects)  Hope this helps, it's a nice little article.  If you significantly expand it within five days, you could put it up for WP:DYK and it could go on the front page! -Malkinann 06:23, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

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Thank you Malkinann, I will try my best 4dhayman 14:53, 22 February 2007 (UTC)


 * You're welcome! :)  Good luck.  Is there any scientific literature about the subject? -Malkinann 22:33, 23 February 2007 (UTC)