Wikipedia:Peer review/Asalouyeh/archive1

Asalouyeh
It has been suggested to me that this article be peer reviewed. It is the first and only article I have written, and so I am a little unsure how it stands up. Comments welcome. Commking 23:50, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest that some of the sections should either be expanded or merged, to make for easier reading (lot of section headings are frustrating to read through.) Good article, well done. --YixilTesiphon Say helloBe shallow 03:26, 22 December 2005 (UTC)