Wikipedia:Peer review/Auburn, Alabama/archive1

Auburn, Alabama
I've just finished a major re-write of this article. It's also the first major article I've written and I'd like to get some feedback on possible changes that would improve the quality of the article. Particular emphasis on areas where there is deviation from appropriate Wikipedia styles is requested.--Lissoy 03:52, Jun 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * Wow, I've not read too many articles this good in a long time. It is well written, and keeps my interest.  There is also an abundance of references and sections on every important point, with acceptable levels of information.  It has a few minor grammatical errors (I corrected a few_, but nothing big.  I like it.--naryathegreat | (talk) 02:22, Jun 14, 2005 (UTC)


 * Thanks. Good catch on the grammar corrections.--Lissoy 02:42, Jun 15, 2005 (UTC)

1) You'd have to summarise the =history= here and move the detail to History of Auburn 2) Please put a smaller image in the leadin section. 3) You have a lot of references, but which reference corresonds to which fact? you would have to use inline references. See Welding and Kalimpong for inline use. Any chance for a ==media== section? you could expand the =government= and =economy= section. Overall 6/10. Is not in the same league of comprehensiveness like FA's Mumbai, Johannesburg (large city) or Kalimpong (small town) though. What I like is the neatness of the page; the headings are well done. = Nichalp  ( Talk )= 19:30, Jun 15, 2005 (UTC)


 * You might want to relabel the picture at the top to indicate that the view is downtown Auburn as seen from Haley Center on the University campus. Otherwise, a very good article. Great job.--Alabamaboy 23:43, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)