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Australia-Indonesia Prisoner Exchange Agreement
Article needs a picture of the Indonesian Minister for Law and Human Rights to replace the box with President SBY DavidYork71 11:55, 20 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:39, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

Auroranorth

 * General comments:


 * 1) Contains good information


 * Suggestions for improvements


 * 1) Well referenced, however please include the following after every one: (accessed 2007-02-03), or whatever the date is.
 * 2) The external links section has built up in multitude, however an asterisk ( *, press Ctrl+8) should be placed before each one.
 * 3) Desperately needs expansion!
 * 4) The Indonesian and Australian coats of arms do not need to be there. Instead, try a picture of the people involved, such as the Attorney General of Australia, Phillip Ruddock.
 * 5) Please put your information into headings.

Auroranorth 10:14, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

AnonEMouse
--AnonEMouse (squeak) 15:23, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * The article starts by saying there is no such agreement - given that, how about renaming without that last word?
 * The references need more than just accessdates, they need publications, publication dates, authors... see cite web or cite news
 * The article concentrates on Au prisoners in In - how about the other way around? Aren't there any Indonesian nationals held in Australia?
 * Similarly, the article concentrates on Australian laws, reports and feelings; what does the Indonesian law, press and public say?
 * How does this compare to exchange agreements (or lack thereof) between Au and other countries? Between In and other countries?