Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated/April 2009

Mortal Kombat: Deception
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 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Per What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.[?]
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 23 additive terms, a bit too much.
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of  a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, etc.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

Clements Markham
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 * If this article is about a person, please add  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * it has been
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

List of Star Trek: The Original Series episodes
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Norton LiveUpdate
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 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
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Joe Louis
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 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 pounds, use 200 pounds, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200&amp;nbsp;pounds.[?]
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it should be changed to  ==Biography== .[?]
 * This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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1995 American League West tie-breaker game
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New Age
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 * You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * allege
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
 * Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: metre (B) (American: meter), organize (A) (British: organise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), skeptic (A) (British: sceptic).
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of  a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Ali's Smile: Naked Scientology
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 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
 * You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

Max Payne (film)
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 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 35mm, use 35 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 35&amp;nbsp;mm.[?]
 * As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.[?]
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * Fixed these things --Peppage BRAINS!  13:33, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

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Jifna
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Internet forum
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 * Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Summary style.[?]
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * is considered
 * are considered
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 23 additive terms, a bit too much.
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of  a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Cinema of Sri Lanka
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 * The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
 * You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of  a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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Tay-Sachs disease
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 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
 * When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it should be changed to  ==Biography== .[?]
 * This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * it has been
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of  a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * “In <font color='red'> the year [of] 2000”
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Violet goby
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 * This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Image use policy and fit under one of the Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
 * This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant.
 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
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Take a Girl Child to Work Day
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 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
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 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
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Acantopsis octoactinotos
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 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
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 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 40 gallons, use 40 gallons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>40&amp;nbsp;gallons</tt>.[?]
 * This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant.
 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

Fungus
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 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 micrometres, use 10 micrometres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>10&amp;nbsp;micrometres</tt>.[?]
 * Fixed. Sasata (talk) 17:57, 27 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .[?]
 * Changed were needed. Malljaja (talk) 17:24, 28 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Summary style.[?]
 * The article's pretty long, so I think this is ok as is. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * it has been
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
 * All weasels are cited. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: flavor (A) (British: flavour), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), recognize (A) (British: recognise), colonize (A) (British: colonise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), analyse (B) (American: analyze), any more (B) (American: anymore), cosy (B) (American: cozy), mold (A) (British: mould), mould (B) (American: mold).
 * Done. The only Brit spellings that remain are those left intentionally, or in the references. Sasata (talk) 08:30, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'>All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'>a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * Done. Malljaja (talk) 19:17, 30 April 2009 (UTC)


 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * Looks ok now. Sasata (talk) 08:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

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Togari (manga)
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 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
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 * The script has spotted the following contractions: didn't, wouldn't, doesn't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Don't, Won't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

Iowa (album)
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Old Time Missionary Baptist
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 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
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 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
 * You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: haven't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

Jack King (NASA)
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Cherry Poppin' Daddies
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Brave Story
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Guitar Hero: On Tour series
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2008 Turkish Grand Prix
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2008 Philadelphia Phillies season
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Oxygen toxicity
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New York State Route 280
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Australian Crawl discography
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Survival horror
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Chuck E. Cheese's
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Pro-ana
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List of New York Mets seasons
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Everything That Happens Will Happen Today
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CBS Reports: The Homosexuals
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John Rawls
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List of National Treasures of Japan (Shrines)
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1906 Tour de France
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David Kellogg Lewis
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1998–99 NBA lockout
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McCombs School of Business
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Euclidean algorithm
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H.M.S. Pinafore
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Eastern Nazarene College
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The Last Castle
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Seleucus I Nicator
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Phaistos Disc
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Earl Cain
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UFC 94
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Samus Aran
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Mariano Rivera
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2008 Malaysian Grand Prix
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Jerry Voorhis
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Magic: The Gathering
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Planet of the Dead
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Nordic Council's Literature Prize
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Timeline of the 2007–08 South Pacific cyclone season
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History of Sunderland A.F.C.
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Forbes Field
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1968 Illinois earthquake
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Flower of Life (manga)
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Abismo Negro
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Fletch (film)
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2008 Spanish Grand Prix
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CE-HTML
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Worcester Ruby Legs all-time roster
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UEFA Champions League 2008–09 knockout stage
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RuneScape
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Inveresk and York Park Precinct, Launceston
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Climate of Tasmania
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Susanna Clarke
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Dragon Ball Z: The History of Trunks
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The Texas Chain Saw Massacre
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List of Star Trek: The Original Series episodes
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Gears of War 2
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Ernie Cooksey
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The Get Up Kids
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Stanford Memorial Church
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Vancouver Area Network of Drug Users
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List of middle schools in England
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Halo Wars
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Unification of Germany
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Jackie Robinson
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Brook Farm
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ZetaTalk
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Diocletianic Persecution
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Toxic encephalopathy
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Poker Face (Lady Gaga song)
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Bale Out
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Goldfrapp
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Harrisburg, Illinois
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Daydream (Mariah Carey album)
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Last Order: Final Fantasy VII
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Daniela Hantuchová
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Glasgow
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Anole (comics)
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No Jacket Required
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Illmatic
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Sulbutiamine
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Norton 360
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New Jersey County Colleges
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List of Case Closed episodes (season 1)
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John Mellencamp
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Cherry Springs State Park
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The Ninth Gate
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Damien (South Park)
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Rosewood massacre
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Spiritual use of cannabis
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Nancy Drew
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Duffy discography
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Project Chanology
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Wall Street (film)
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Indiana Territory
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Ethan Hawke
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Electron
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United States presidential election, 2008 timeline
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Protophormia terraenovae
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Gabriel of Our Lady of Sorrows
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List of State University of New York units
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Live action role-playing game
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Ambassador of Russia to Austria
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The Moon and the Sandals
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Bell Labs Holmdel Complex
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New World Order (conspiracy theory)
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Kronos Quartet discography
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32nd Infantry Division (United States)
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Billboard Top Latin Albums
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Brian May
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2004 World Series
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Forti
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The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks
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Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace
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