Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated/Archive 1

Aradia, or the Gospel of the Witches
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Hurricane Irene (1999)
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Hurricane Esther (1961)
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Sheikh Mujibur Rahman
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Charizard
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Kernel (computer science)
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Khan Wali Khan
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Boxing
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Notre Dame football
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Research into health benefits of Falun Gong
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Functional programming

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Programming language

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Macedonia (terminology)

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Dion Fortune

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Johnny Cash

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Barry Goldwater

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Colombo

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Horace Mann School

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Zastava Koral

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Night of the Living Dead

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Adi Shankara
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The Philadelphia Inquirer
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 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Myanmar
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Busking
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Busking
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Hideki Noda
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Watermelon Man (film)
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Gary Barnett
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IG Farben Building
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BBC

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 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.) Removed what I could find
 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 26 additive terms, a bit too much.
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
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 * Thanks, Andy t 21:35, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Updating what has been done, my comments in italics--<font color="Brown">Daduzi <font color="Green">talk  17:35, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

Tropical Storm Henri (2003)

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Florida Virtual School

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Capitalism and Freedom

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The Simpsons
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Al-Kateb v Godwin
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United States Numbered Highways
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Nelvana
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Battery electric vehicle
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Oprah Winfrey
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Pernambucan Revolt
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Sequence alignment
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Moscow
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Peace Dollar
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DADVSI
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Out-of-body experience
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Jasper High School
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Bricker Amendment
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Solar system
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Princess Peach
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Llywelyn the Great
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David Lynch
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Fittipaldi (constructor)
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 * Only suggested limit seems to be 3 lines, which the existing captions do not exceed. However, you have made me aware of Captions and I have rewritten the captions to be more in line with it. Thanks! 4u1e 19:29, 30 June 2006 (UTC)


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Maximum Ride
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National Collegiate Athletic Association (Philippines)
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State Military characters of Fullmetal Alchemist
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 * Fixed. TomStar81 08:59, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
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Jehovah's Witnesses
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Fundamental Rights in India
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 * No units of measurement used in this article. The automated reviewer may have tripped over the numerous occurences of nth Amendment Act (e.g. 42nd Amendment Act) -- May the Force be with you! Shr e shth91(esperanza elections!) 07:08, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
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Trilogy of Terror
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Mormonism and Christianity
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Oldham Riots

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Dundee

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Number 1's (Mariah Carey album)

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Maraba Coffee

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Final Fantasy VI
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Warsaw Uprising (1794)
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The Maltese Falcon
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French people
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Noyabrsk
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Syracuse, New York
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Aortic dissection
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Astrology
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The Maltese Falcon (1931 film)
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Majin Buu
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Red state vs. blue state divide
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Pokémon Trading Card Game
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Nathu La
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FBI Ten Most Wanted Fugitives
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U. Muthuramalingam Thevar
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Freeza
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Battleship
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Heavy Traffic
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Expressionist architecture
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Stanton Drew
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Lone Wolf (gamebooks)
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Romulus Augustus
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Kryptonite
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Book of Abraham
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Lost (TV series)
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Banksia menziesii
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Bikram Yoga
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Moon
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Kevin Spacey
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Martha Stewart
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North Carolina State University
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 * Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am <font color='red'> now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
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Bicycle and motorcycle dynamics

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 * Please alphabetize the categories and/or interlanguage links.
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 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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 * Thanks, Andy t 15:42, 27 June 2006 (UTC)

Ecclesiastical heraldry
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 * Per WP:WIAFA, Images should have concise captions.
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Micro Mart
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 * Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>18&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.
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Alexander Coe
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 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006, but do not link January 2006.
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 * As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * As is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, for footnotes, the footnote should be located right after the punctuation mark, such that there is no space inbetween. For example, change blah blah [2]. to blah blah.[2]
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Satyajit Ray
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 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
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 * Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>18&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.
 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006, but do not link January 2006.
 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .
 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .
 * This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant.
 * article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 32 additive terms, a bit too much.
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Fujiwara no Teika
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 * Please alphabetize the categories.
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 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * As is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, for footnotes, the footnote should be located right after the punctuation mark, such that there is no space inbetween. For example, change blah blah [2]. to blah blah.[2]
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Chronology of works by Caravaggio
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Kazi Nazrul Islam
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Space Shuttle program
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 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'> All pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'> a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am <font color='red'> now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
 * As is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, for footnotes, the footnote should be located right after the punctuation mark, such that there is no space inbetween. For example, change blah blah [2]. to blah blah.[2]
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Johnny Depp
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 * While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 10 additive terms, a bit too much.
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Amphibians of Australia
You should definitely aim at featured list status, as this article primarily is just a list.

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