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Ave Maryam


I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to receive updated feedback following a huge trim/ce after a failed FAC process. Reception section's already ce-ed, some concerns have been addressed. For the unaddressed concern, Facebook is a prim-source from the festival and thus I think is valid. Pinging, , and as FAC participants.

Thanks,  Gerald WL  06:01, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Wondering why you have decided not to go through WP:GAN first?  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:51, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , well I just want to see if the prose is now okay (considering that's why it failed the FAC). If this PR remains inactive then I'll go to GAN.  Gerald WL  04:21, 29 January 2021 (UTC)