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B-52 Stratofortress
I've listed this article for peer review because it's almost to the point where I can put it up for FAC, but I want to get some fresh eyes on it to spot the stuff I've missed.

Thanks,

Trevor MacInnis (Contribs) 16:40, 13 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:11, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * It looks pretty good to me. I only saw a few minor issues here and there. The lead seems a little brief for the length of this article. The first two paragraphs are a single sentence and the third paragraph has two sentences. Could they be expanded a little to satisfy WP:LEAD? Also the sentence that starts with "Beginning in with the" in the lead seems as if a date is missing betwee the 'in' and 'with'. Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 22:58, 17 October 2007 (UTC)