Wikipedia:Peer review/Baby Driver/archive1

Baby Driver
I've listed this article for peer review because I am eyeing an FA candidacy in the future. I’ve put a lot of work into this article, now a very recently promoted GA, but feel it falls just short of meeting the FA criteria. I think presently, barring minor prose issues in the rest of the body, the critical response section is the biggest issue standing in the way of a successful FAC because of sentence rhythm and overall structure. This was a similar issue I had with another article I was successful at getting to FA status (with the help of Mike Christie, and also after seven attempts!). Some feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks, DAP  💅 00:49, 12 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Going to take this up, hopefully will get the review up soon! Stilistic (talk) 05:32, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * 1) Maybe I am wrong, but shouldn't it be that it was a longtime project rather than is, considering it is now released?
 * I’ve gone back and forth with it, but I believe either is appropriate.


 * 1) "However, Doc threatens him back into a life of crime, threatening to harm Debora and Joseph if he resists." I feel this could be condensed a touch.
 * Revised.


 * 1) Is there anything that can be added with respect to the casting of Kevin Spacey?
 * He wasn’t active in the film’s press tour barring less than a handful of interviews, in which he speaks about his character’s motivations and praises Wright for his artistic vision. Unfortunately, as a result, I was unable to find any useful information about his casting.


 * 1) Is "R. Marcos Taylor as gun runner Armie" necessary, given that the actor has no article and the character is not otherwise mentioned in the article?
 * Revised.

Gonna add more later. Stilistic (talk) 06:38, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Take as long as you need. Thank you for taking up the task! DAP  💅 16:10, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Oh my god I'm so sorry, I fell off the face of the Earth! I'll try and get this done ASAP. - Stilistic (talk) 16:37, 4 March 2019 (UTC)