Wikipedia:Peer review/Back to the Future timeline/archive1

Back to the Future timeline
Hey, I want to get this unique article to FA status. Any suggestions?--The lorax 00:33, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I definitely think this is a really unique and interesting article (I own the trilogy) and the overall subject is very interesting. I recently watched the trilogy and the information is exact and very well documented.  I do have a few suggestions, mostly on formatting the article differently.  I believe the informationm is spot on and really cant be improved but here are a few suggestions I feel will make the article look more appealing and be easier to read:
 * I like when articles have some type of Infobox and/or a photo at the top-right corner to give it some color and some visualization for the reader.
 * The intro is way to lengthy, it should be one-two paragraphs (in this case) and just summarize the article (such as the overall subject matter (time-travel, etc)). This intro is too in-depth and is actually concrete details that shouldnt be in an intro.  This info (or most of it) should have its own heading (such as Background).
 * The Chart of alternate timelines should be reformatted so that the chart itself is located on the right, while the info/words should be on the left. This just removes some empty space, and ties the description of the chart with the chart itself.
 * Overall the info in this article is very good and the topic is very interesting. Good luck on the higher rating.
 * --Josh Matthews 02:50, 4 June 2007 (UTC)