Wikipedia:Peer review/BackupHDDVD/archive2

BackupHDDVD
Peer review/BackupHDDVD/archive1

Having recently failed an FA nomination with a combination of nit-picking and serious concerns, this article needs quite a bit of improvement. I'm looking to iron out every seam and any advice to that end is greatly appreciated. Noclip 15:18, 6 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:09, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Most of the problems the automated peer review found were trivial. I'd really appreciate an in depth commentary on the quality of the writing, the flow, and other major problems. Noclip 03:40, 9 May 2007 (UTC)