Wikipedia:Peer review/Bank of China (Hong Kong)/archive1

Bank of China (Hong Kong)
This is my first really comprehensive article and I picked an easy topic, and modelled most of the stuff after Ryanair, a FA. I don't think I am experienced enough to tell what's right. Any and all comments appreciated... --JuntungWu 17:08, 22 Jan 2005 (UTC)
 * External links should not be placed anywhere but in the appropriate section at the end of the article (this is referring to all those external links interspersed throughout the text, i.e. the stock ticker links). Johnleemk | Talk 13:39, 25 Jan 2005 (UTC)
 * Very good, though JetCo could be explained a little more, and the references section needs to be placed in the required format. See Cite sources. As always, though, a very thorough and well-researched article :-) - Ta bu shi da yu 02:54, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll move more over from the main article on JetCo, and do some tidying. --JuntungWu 17:51, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * OK, once that's done I suggest moving to FAC. - Ta bu shi da yu 01:44, 12 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * I am still tinkering with it. Will do so later. JuntungWu 17:33, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)