Wikipedia:Peer review/Bart Sells His Soul/archive1

Bart Sells His Soul

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2009.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. This article recently was a candidate for WP:GA. Unfortunately, the GA review was closed as fail at that time, due to instability and failure of WP:WIAGA point number five. The first GA reviewer brought up many points at the GA review, which can be seen at Talk:Bart Sells His Soul/GA1. I'd like to hear any other potential feedback from peer reviewers here, as well as if the article's current state is sufficiently better than at the time of the first peer review - before trying again for WP:GAN. Thank you for your time, Cirt (talk) 02:25, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * ''Note: Notices placed at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject The Simpsons, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Comedy, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Religion, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Television, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Animation, and Wikipedia talk:WikiProject American Animation. Cirt (talk) 02:29, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

The use of "can't" noted by Peer_review/Automated/June_2009 is used in the name of a source, so that should not be changed. I will do some additional copyediting throughout the article. Cirt (talk) 10:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Note
 * Update: I've done some additional copyediting throughout. Cirt (talk) 10:40, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Comment - What was the edit war/instability about? - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 20:32, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * ,, , , and . Fortunately, the article seems to have stabilized since June 8, 2009. Cirt (talk) 20:48, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I think it's fine for GAN. That wasn't much of an edit war, and it's died down.  I haven't looked into the changes from before, but it looks like one of the better Simpsons ep GAs. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 22:44, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay I'll give it a little bit more time, to see if editors will provide input coming from those WikiProject talk page notices I gave, above. Cirt (talk) 01:08, 13 June 2009 (UTC)