Wikipedia:Peer review/Battle of Beruna Ford/archive1

Battle of Beruna Ford
A friend in the WikiProject Narnia did this article, and I think it looks great, what do you think should be done to bring it to GA? Bornagain4 22:07, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
 * It ends a bit abruptly - I don't know what should go there, but as it is it looks incomplete, even on a purely aesthetic basis. Seegoon 17:11, 4 September 2006 (UTC)

I rewrote the article, but was on break; thanks to Bornagain for bringing it up here. I agree that it's a little sudden at the end. I did remove the list, though, and added the Narnia template to make a more official-looking ending. However, I'll bring this up on the talk page. Thanks for the comments. --Fbv65 e del / &#9745;t / &#9755;c || 01:28, 5 September 2006 (UTC)