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Battle of Beruna Ford
I just nominated this article for GA status and it was failed for the lead not being written in the fictional present tense. I fixed this, and spoke to the reviewer, who suggested it was still not ready due to being too in-universe. Is this too in-universe, and if so, suggestions on how to fix it? Thanks, Fbv65 e del / ☑t / ☛c || 04:35, 23 December 2006 (UTC)
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