Wikipedia:Peer review/Be Here Now/archive1

Be Here Now
Mediocre album by a great band; there is a good story here, hope that it is conveyed. Ceoil 21:46, 26 June 2007 (UTC) Thanks for the tips, all now implemented. Ceoil 21:59, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I had a little trouble following the cast of characters. Who is McGee? In "Recording" can you specify who Morris is (I skipped the intro).
 * There are a couple of small unreferenced quotes throughout, like "regular, everyday collection of tunes." and "cocaine set to music".
 * "generated more hype than the British music industry had seen in decades" is quite the statement...the last 9 words are probably not necessary.
 * At the end of the first paragraph of "Reception", what is the footnote (currently #19) sourcing? (Hint: the link is to the wrong site but is a copy of footnote #22) --maclean 06:32, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment The music sample description could perhaps be extended. What number track is it on the album, what characterised the piece? etc. CloudNine 11:00, 27 June 2007 (UTC)