Wikipedia:Peer review/Ben Franklin High School/archive1

Ben Franklin High School
I'm hoping to get some ideas on how to improve the article, how far it might be from GA status, and what Importance the school has within its projects. Thanks! --Jh12 23:16, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good. The Student Body section could be expanded, because it currently only includes the nationality of the students. 1312020Wikicop 00:59, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

bcasterline
Some comments: In general, I think there's room for expansion. Looks like a good start though. Good luck. -- bcasterline • talk 01:19, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
 * The wording of the lead is awkward.
 * "History" doesn't actually have much history aside from Hurricane Katrina and address changes. Could be expanded.
 * "Academics" is mostly statistics. Could be expanded.
 * Cut down on the bolded terms under "Enrollment" and "Extracurricular activities".
 * "Extracurricular activities" has lots of stubby subsections. Expand them or remove the headlines.
 * Consider removing the "Trivia" section per WP:TRIV.