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Bernard Lee on stage and screen
This peer review discussion has been closed. With appearances in over 100 films, plus an extensive stage and television repertoire, Bernard Lee was a tireless character actor. He is best remembered for his role as M in the James Bond series, although also played notable roles in The Third Man, The Blue Lamp and a rare leading role in Whistle Down the Wind. This record of his professional work has recently been split away from the main biographical article and re-worked extensively. The goal after PR is to list for FL status. Many thanks for any help and advice people are able to give. - SchroCat (talk) 16:41, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Brief comments from Cass
 * "Lee's career spanned 1934 to 1981" - seems like there is a word missing, "from" or "between" maybe?
 * From now added - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * "He returned to acting after the war and was offered a role part in the play "Stage Door" while awaiting his demob." - role or part?
 * already cleared that one up for me. - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Check the entry to The Desperate Hours, as its year seems to be incorrect.
 * It was - now sorted. - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * I'm not too sure on the laws around overlinking within the tables. If its the same as FAC, check for overlinking to Embassy Theatre and St. Martin's Theatre.
 * Should be OK: as the table is sortable, the order can change, so multiple links are OK. Overlink is geared towards prose to ensure readability, which isn't the case with tables, so FL takes a more flexible view. - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * On the second table, I would be consistent with the rank titles within the "Role" section. I would not abbreviate, instead I would use the full name.
 * Agreed - now sorted. - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * As per the overlinking comment above, if it turns out this applies to lists, there is a gross amount of overlinking to the BBC and ITV.
 * As above: they should be OK. - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Finally, as per the rank comment above, check for consistency within this table too. At first glance I see Superintendent / Supt. Also, I would still use the full titles for Sergeant and Detective Inspector.
 * Agreed—all soreted, as above - SchroCat (talk) 22:34, 27 December 2012 (UTC)

 Cassianto Talk    19:48, 27 December 2012 (UTC)