Wikipedia:Peer review/Bette Davis/archive1

Bette Davis
I would like to nominate this article for Featured article status at some point in the not to distant future.

Could editors give their feedback on the state of the article please?

As this is my first nomination for Peer review please forgive any errors I have made. --  Funky Monkey   (talk)   13:14, 21 June 2006 (UTC)


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 * Thanks, Andy t 14:50, 21 June 2006 (UTC)