Wikipedia:Peer review/Bettie Page/archive1

Bettie Page
Since I started this article years ago this might be considered a self-nomination, but it's attracted a lot of attention from other Wikipedians, & after reading it once again, this article feels to me worthy of FAC consideration. I'm posting it here to test the waters to see if anyone else feels the same way. -- llywrch 8 July 2005 20:13 (UTC)
 * It's pretty good overall. The page could use a couple of section dividers: one for her modelling career and the second for the aftermath. That first picture of her isn't very flattering. It'd be good to have a portrait-style image at the top, with the B&D image down in the appropriate section. But that's just my opinion, of course. :) &mdash; RJH 16:03, 9 July 2005 (UTC)