Wikipedia:Peer review/Bikini Bottom/archive2

Bikini Bottom
Peer review/Bikini Bottom/archive1

This article has improved a lot since the last peer review and its well on its way to being a featured article. The lists have been removed, it relates to the real world, there is now a picture of the city, it broadly covers the subject, etc. There may be a few problems left with this article, such as the fact that most of the images do not have fair use rationales and that the table of contents is too long. Any suggestions on how to improve the article further would be appreciated. Squirepants101 01:59, 27 March 2007 (UTC)


 * It's far too in universe - it's not enough to just say 'such and such is a fictional...' and then go on in the rest of the article treating it as if it's real. All of your citations are to the show itself - did the creators of the show ever discuss Bikini Bottom in interviews etc.?  -Malkinann 04:02, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Note that it was AMK152 who did most of these things, not me. Squirepants101 12:30, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I meant the plural 'your', sorry for the confusion. -Malkinann 10:10, 30 March 2007 (UTC)