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Bionicle: Mask of Light

 * This article attained GA status last month, and I am eager to improve it to A status, perhaps get it near or even to FA status. What separates this article from Wikipedias best? Thanks! Judgesurreal777 04:29, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I think it has the makings of a good article, as it has a good use of inline citations and a decent structure, but I found it unbalanced and not comprehensive. It also needs copyediting for style ("he's too much of a wimp" for example, doesn't have a very encylopedic tone).
 * The plot section is far too long - it should be a summary, not a blow-by-blow account of every scene.
 * It needs a section on the characters. This is currently interwoven with the plot section and makes it difficult to read as well as increasing its length still further
 * The production section covers immediate pre-production only. It needs information on earlier pre-production, production and post-production.
 * I assume the film is CG animation, but the only clue is in the accompanying images.
 * Some of the information is disconnected, assuming a familiarity with the subject:For the design, Shakespeare noted that "The first film had primary colors that were coded to the areas and a younger feel.". Coded to the areas? What does that mean?
 * Hope this helps. Yomangani talk 00:55, 16 September 2006 (UTC)