Wikipedia:Peer review/Black Friday (Maldives)/archive1

Black Friday (Maldives)
I would like this artilce to be peer reviewed, basically for grammar, spelling and flow. --Oblivious 03:11, 6 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Okei so far I got a copyedit from Wayward, but no feedback from anyone. Still waiting :) --Oblivious 15:56, 7 August 2005 (UTC)


 * There are a few POV issues that need to be addressed:


 * "Several key reformists were allegedly blacklisted and subsequently put under surveillance."
 * "Gayoom's critics are often said to be arrested and tortured in jail, an allegation he continuously denies."
 * "Women were also beaten with truncheons and they sustained severe injuries."
 * &mdash;Wayward 02:42, August 8, 2005 (UTC)


 * Must these lines be removed or re-written in diffrent way? suggestions? --Oblivious 10:12, 8 August 2005 (UTC)