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Black Majesty
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because, quite simply, I wish to find out what else I can do to improve the article's quality.

Thanks, Inf666 (talk) 00:30, 8 March 2008 (UTC)



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Rightyho, some comments on where to go from here... That's about it for me. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:02, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Expand the lead, take a look at WP:LEAD for advice. A single sentence simply isn't sufficient.
 * As per the warning templates at the top of the page, references are needed for this article to be anything other than a B-class article.
 * Minor manual of style issues such as the use of an en-dash to separate years (so, in the infobox, you should have 2002–present, not 2002 - Present...)
 * The article suffers a little from assuming that the reader is completely commensurate with the musical genre. I'm not, and find phrases like "hair metal" a bit confusing.
 * The subsection "Black Majesty" needs to be expanded and preferably renamed, it's a bit odd having the name of the article as also the name of a subsection of the article.