Wikipedia:Peer review/Blindness/archive1

Blindness
I would like for this article - not to mention the related ones I?ve written around it - to be as helpful and factually accurate as possible. With that aim in mind, I?m posting it here for scrutiny. Kael (Aug. 25)
 * A good article, with only a bit more work needed. I'd suggest adding the Guide dog section, and I hope you can also clean up some of the red links. While I understand your purpose in doing so, it's probably not a good idea to put uncreated links in the See also section, since there isn't anything to see. Keep up the great work! Denni &#9775; 21:19, 2004 Aug 28 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the feedback. I did add to the guide dog section, in addition to putting a stub tag on it, but I'll be circling back soon enough. Kael
 * How about adding things on how construction standards changed to better accomodate blind people? I know traffic lights that play a music when it's safe to cross and fences with automatic doors that open up when a train arrives. Revth 13:34, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)
 * Maybe some treatment of web accessibility for the visually impaired? some info here: www.w3.org/WAI  ... if you write some of that up, I'd be happy to massage it a little.  I don't really have time right now to do morePedant
 * Both good ideas - although I think accessibility for the visually impaired should be a separate article. Kael