Wikipedia:Peer review/Blue Comet SPT Layzner/archive1

Blue Comet SPT Layzner
An anime from the 1980's; the redlinked article was directed from the Super Robot Wars page, and I added a general overview. Now other people have expanded this a lot and I'm interested in making this into a featured article. Please help with any advice/direction you may have. Thank you. Viewer 00:12, 3 May 2006 (UTC)


 * no references
 * expand infobox (maybe merge Staff into it)
 * story section needs a spoiler tag
 * Correction, 'story' sections should have spoilers written out of them. --zippedmartin 00:49, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
 * external links should be included for people looking for more information.
 * trivia needs to be expanded
 * "Delete triva section" is one of the first things people on FAC will say... --zippedmartin 00:49, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I suggest creating a "Reception" section talking about ratings and show reviews. Merge US Release section into there.
 * ...most of this information is in the second paragraph in the lead.


 * lead should included where the show was brodcasted. Japan?
 * Super Powered Tracers section is a little over detailed, If you wish, create a subpage for it and/or only summarize it on this page.
 * Image:Layzner music album.jpg is included in the article and its copyright said its a album cover. No mention of a soundtrack/album is in the article.
 * Characters section is also over-detailed. A sub-page should be created if you wish otherwise the section should include only the protagonists and antagonists.
 * image sizes are too large making the article look unprofesion. Also possibly there might be too many images, I recommend reducing.

Thats all I can see for now, more expansion would help and a good copy-edit. Thank you. - Tutmosis 00:55, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

Thank you, Tutmosis. Viewer 19:22, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Main problem is huge number of completely unsourced assertions, I'm tempted to go through the article and sprinkle around, but for instance: "was a ratings failure in its second arc" who says? what were the ratings? "the final Episode in particular feels like a rushed, incomplete mess" In who's opinion? etc etc. See also User:BrianSmithson/Writing_about_fiction. --zippedmartin 00:49, 17 May 2006 (UTC)

The Characters section does only contain protagonists and antagonists: the Show is an ensemble Cast.

And the Show was obviously a ratings failure since it was cut back from 50-something Episodes to 38, coincidentally two of the biggest Gundam Series-along with several other popular Mecha-aired at this time. As for the last Episode...it's seen in its entirety in OVA #3, wherein it makes a lot more sense and is less "edited".