Wikipedia:Peer review/Blue Velvet/archive1

Blue Velvet
I would like to get this article in shape to reach GA status and would like any constructive criticism, comments, suggestions, etc. to improve it. Thanks! Count Ringworm 20:19, 6 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Again, take it to film peer review. Daniel Case 17:52, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

A few thoughts:
 * Last sentence, first paragraph of the lead section seems awkward. Could this be broken into two sentences?
 * There are several tags in the article that need to be addressed. The synopsis in particular seems far too detailed. The "Direction" section is completely lacking in citations.
 * Numerous dashes need to be replaced with em-dashes.
 * How well was the film received overseas?
 * Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 20:50, 12 March 2007 (UTC)