Wikipedia:Peer review/Bluespotted stingray/archive1

Bluespotted stingray
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I am really eager to have a GA article and know there are things I know I've missed. But for things to really look out for would 1) be plagiarism... even the slightest bit. 2) Mis-content or lack of citation. 3) Grammar 4) Any additional help! I appreciate this so much. Thank You, Stanfordbound 14 (talk) 02:00, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments by StringTheory11

 * What does it's scientific name mean?
 * A description of the differences between the Java form and the Bali form would help.
 * What exactly entails a "true stingray?"
 * More peer-reviewed sources would be nice.
 * The image captions could use a bit more description.
 * A lot of the sentences could probably be combined to make for a smoother flow.
 * Predators section either needs expansion or should be merged into another section; same with conservation section.
 * I can't discern at all what the parasites section is trying to say. I recommend a rewrite.
 * What is the size of the ray, both length and weight?