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Bobby Eaton
I’ve been working on this article for a while and taken it through the automated peer review and fixed it’s comments. I’m hoping to put it forward for Good Article or Feature Article nomination soon but I’m hoping to get a good peer review in before hand to handle any issues before a nomination. I’m especially looking for copyedit comments since my native language isn’t English (I’m generally good at it but there are still things that I may miss). Thanks in advance MPJ-DK 21:34, 7 July 2007 (UTC)