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Bon Jovi discography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it is now worthy of feature article status. Before I nominate it for FA, I would like to get some peer reviews.

The Bon Jovi discography page was rated a C-Class on the quality scale a few months back, but I have now referenced all information, as well as created new sections such as Music Videos and Promo & Bonus releases. I also reworked the intro paragraphs, categorized the video releases section, added worldwide album sales information and added other charted songs information.

Perhaps the only relevant information missing on the page are 3 music video directors (for "Runaway", "If I Was Your Mother" and "Wanted Dead or Alive 2003"). I have searched everywhere for sources but I have been unlucky. However the other 49 music videos have all been referenced.

Looking forward to some peer reviews. It would be much appreciated.

Thanks, Savvi72 (talk) 08:10, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Just a couple of notes for now:


 * DAB Links - Fix these.
 * Ref 18 is dead
 * Descriptive alt text is needed for the image. Find out more here
 * In last paragraph of the lead there's a ref (13) before the comma, should be after.
 * Write out in full any hash then number (eg #1 - number one or "both reached #1" -> "both reached number one".)
 * "To date, Bon Jovi has sold more than 120 million records worldwide." - Use a specific date, imagine this was being read a year from now.
 * In the notes section ""Superman Tonight" is currently being filmed." should be removed or cited. Even then, it's about an upcoming event so I would say it'd be best to wait until it's done to add it.

Sorry it's only a couple of comments, but I hope it helps.  Cr im so nF ox  talk 22:29, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * No need to be sorry. Your comments helped a lot. I have fixed them all except the "Superman Tonight" music video. Just looking for a source. Thank you for the review. Much appreciated. Savvi72 (talk) 02:34, 29 January 2010 (UTC)