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Bonnie Tyler
This peer review discussion has been closed. I would like to request a peer review on this article. It has failed for GA status twice. The second GA fail review gave a helpful list of improvements. Having acted on some of them, I would like a fellow editor to read over some of the sections under "Career";
 * Previous peer review
 * 1976–78: The World Starts Tonight and Natural Force
 * 1979–81: Diamond Cut and Goodbye to the Island
 * 1991–94: Success in Europe
 * 1995–99: Free Spirit, All in One Voice and decline.

I am attempting to apply a more narrative and fluid approach to writing the article, which used to read very disjointedly.

I would be so grateful if someone could help out.

Thanks, Bonnietylersave (talk) 12:29, 18 March 2015 (UTC)