Wikipedia:Peer review/Book of Abraham/archive3

Book of Abraham
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to promote it to GA (and maybe even FA) one day. I've been working on this for about a month now, adding sources, cleaning up tags, moving things around, and all-in-all expanding it by about 30% (here's a 'before and after'). I know that in all the 'construction' some things may have been spelled wrong or written out in a funny way, and I would love it if someone wanted to go through and give me an honest appraisal.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:22, 17 August 2016 (UTC)