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Born This Way
This peer review discussion has been closed. This article has gone through a major restructuring and despited improving significantly, there are still some issues that would limit this article from becoming a GA article and/or a FAC. I'd like to know some improvements that can be made, and some assistance with a thorough copy-edit would be much appreciated.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, DAP388 (talk) 01:09, 24 September 2011 (UTC)


 * WP:ARTICLESIZE. This is passing the threshold level of being an encyclopedic article, and over to fandom fanpedia. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:10, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Definitely needs trimming; especially the Singles section. The references are a mess and the overall content is too confusing to even comprehend. (cough *artwork reveal date*) — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  10:06, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Trimmed a lot of the extra stuff out of the article, particularly in the Singles and Promotion sections. Will probably start on the intro and the references tomorrow. — DAP388 (talk) 21:08, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * No DAP, it still goes into unnecessary details, especially in the composition and themes. The article is 145KB in size, that's greater than even freaking FA bios! This needs a drastic reduction to 75–80 KB. I will see what I can do. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 03:07, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
 * LOL, this is starting to get frustrating and tedious. I feel like I'm doing the best I can do. Help would be much appreciated! — DAP388 (talk) 05:38, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, trimming it down to 75–80 KB seems like a bit of a stretch. Unless it drastically shrinks via references, then you'd be cutting out a lot of info in regards to the album. — DAP388 (talk) 16:56, 1 October 2011
 * Yes, I think the article should be trimmed. The composition section, however, is only very long because there are 17 songs on the album (including the three bonus tracks). I'll do what I can to help trim it down.--&#38;レア (talk) 14:21, 9 October 2011 (UTC)