Wikipedia:Peer review/British African-Caribbean community/archive1

British African-Caribbean community
This is a self nomination - as I wrote most of the material here with additional help from User:Ackees. This being an under-represented area of wikipedia, the number of editors taking a look and making amendments or improvements is few and far between, so I could do with more pairs of eyes scanning the article to see how it shapes up. --Zleitzen 14:19, 18 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 17:02, 18 November 2006 (UTC)


 * There is an awful lot of negative stuff particularly about racism. Now I am sure this is a major and important part of the experience of African-Carribean immigrants, but especially in the early part of this article this seems to be the sole focus. E.g. in the recent history section, Steven Lawrence, Gun Crime, Tension with Asians. In the community section, Police harrasment, 'unfriendly pubs', discrimination in politics and schools. Maybe it should present the positive side, cos if it was all that bad why would anyone have immigrated in the first place. Just a suggestion.