Wikipedia:Peer review/Bronx High School of Science/archive1

Bronx High School of Science
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to submit it for a GA soon, and would like to clean it up before then. Any detailed comments to make this article as clean and top quality as possible would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Iankap99 User:Iankap99 00:37, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

I am a long-time fan of Wolverines, so I will give you a few minutes. This article is a long way from being ready for WP:GAC.
 * The most glaring issue to me is WP:V. I would need to see at least one inline citation per paragraph before I would take this article seriously.
 * Also the sourcing for many of the lists is unclear.
 * Convert any ALL CAPS titles to normal font.
 * Eliminate deadlinks
 * I must say that I am surprised not to see a Latin motto.
 * I believe the name of the yearbook is suppose to be italicized.
 * File:Bxscience old.jpg claims a PD-old, but the building is noted to be a 1918 structure. Licensing must be invalid.
 * The images are low quality, but this will not hold up GA. Just check around for better images and swap them in as you are able.
 * WP:CAPTIONs should end in periods if they are complete sentences and should not if they are not.
 * If you could merge some of the choppy paragraphs, the writing would seem more professional.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:32, 28 April 2010 (UTC)