Wikipedia:Peer review/Bruno Maddox/archive1

Bruno Maddox
Hello. I figured I would see if anyone had any useful initial reactions to this new article. Here are my concerns in list form:
 * Is the Themes section working out? Are Science and Satire actual themes or really topics? I took the Themes section idea from an earlier version of the Joss Whedon article.
 * Is this article the place for a plot summary of Maddox's first novel? I want to make this an FA that has depth enough to make it interesting but not enough that the article weights in at 60k or more.
 * Does the article need a copy edit?

Any comments you may have would be appreciated. Best, BillDeanCarter 22:47, 13 August 2007 (UTC)