Wikipedia:Peer review/Bugatti Veyron 16.4/archive1

Bugatti Veyron 16.4
I think this article is very good, just need any idea on how to make it even better! --Karrmann

Thanks, AndyZ t 22:58, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
 * A couple of quick things to start working on:
 * Would prefer if the lead were extended to 2 paragraphs (as suggested by WP:LEAD)
 * "1999 EB 18/4 "Veyron" shouldn't be bold
 * The list of 10 radiators should be converted to prose.
 * The external links should be converted to footnotes.