Wikipedia:Peer review/Bughouse chess/archive1

Bughouse chess
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it up to FA standard. I previously nominated it for FA, see HERE, but the article didn't make it. I think most of the concerns were addressed but I am looking for any comments that can improve the article. Especially the FA 1a criterion ((a) "Well written" means that the prose is engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard.) might be an issue.

Thanks a lot for any help you can provide, Voorlandt 06:46, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

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