Wikipedia:Peer review/California State Polytechnic University, Pomona/archive1

California State Polytechnic University, Pomona
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I intend to nominate it for FA and I'd like to hear some feedback.

Thank you, Marco Guzman, Jr Chat  15:52, 15 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Comments from Nikkimaria
 * See here for a list of potentially problematic links
 * WP:OVERLINK: don't link very common terms like United States, and don't link the same terms multiple times
 * Avoid vague time statements like "in recent years" where possible
 * Spell out numbers under 10
 * Check punctuation throughout, particularly hyphens/dashes
 * Prose in general is a bit dense and inaccessible to non-specialist readers
 * When a measurement is being used as an adjective, be sure to employ the adjective parameter of the convert template
 * Spell out "%" in article text
 * Don't use contractions outside of direct quotes
 * What is "water intrusion"? "sense of arrival"? Check for potentially unfamiliar terms and phrases
 * Don't italicize organizations, languages, etc
 * Be consistent in whether you use hyphens, dashes or slashes when notating an academic or fiscal year
 * Citation(s) for Pep Band section, Rose Parade section?
 * Don't link terms in See also already linked in article text
 * No citations to Powell 1956. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:33, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the comments Nikkimaria, I'll work on them ASAP. -- Marco Guzman, Jr Talk  15:50, 29 September 2011 (UTC)