Wikipedia:Peer review/Captain America: Civil War/archive1

Captain America: Civil War
This peer review discussion has been closed.. Need a peer review to keep up with GT status of MCU films. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 15:58, 30 April 2015 (UTC)


 * I see that the filming section has a lot of info on the cast, which seems better in the pre-production section. Kailash29792 (talk) 08:23, 6 June 2015 (UTC)

Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 16:21, 8 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Will do. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:49, 9 June 2015 (UTC)


 * First of all, have in mind that the article can't be a good or featured article until the film is released, as articles about works still under production are considered unstable. Still, it is a good idea to have it as good as possible, so that when it is released the work needed is minimal. Now, let's see
 * Cast: You should include both an in-universe description of the character's role in the story, and an out-of-universe info about the actor and his work in the film. Vision, War Machine, Scarlet Witch and Ant-Man only have in-universe descriptions, add more info once it's available.
 * Yes, that is the intent (per other MCU film articles). We just have not gotten anything from these actors or the creative team to add anything. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * The premise is basically a "crisis crossover" of the MCU, so what about the characters introduced in Agents of Shield, Agent Carter or the Netflix series? If they are not used, we should have a line explaining their absence, as that may became a common concern.
 * Once again, if a reliable source exists discussing this, then we will certainly find a way. Right now, even if a reliable sources covers this, it is just their personal speculation of characters they would like to see, not really commentary about them appearing, or not. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * You should mention that the film Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice from the "Distinguished Competition" was initially scheduled to be released on the same day, and then changed.
 * I feel that info is more applicable at that article (which has some info on this). If they chose to stay on the date, it would be worth a mention in my opinion. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Most sections have an excesive use of quotations.
 * Will attempt to work on that. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * A sentence in "Filming" has 5 footnotes. Do we need so many ones?
 * Yes. It is to justify the use of "many outlets and fans" at the beginning of the sentence. Originally, it was broken down with thoughts from each outlets, but has since been condensed to a general summary of the statements, with the refs there for readers to continue if they choose. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * "Music" and "Release" will of course have to be expanded, when info is available. Cambalachero (talk) 14:45, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Yes indeed! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)


 * I've responded to each of your points above . Thanks! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:35, 11 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Quick comment Is it worthwhile adding about the end credits scene for Ant-Man which is taken directly from this film? Presuming you can find a reliable source of course. Miyagawa (talk) 09:25, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * We definitely have the sources, but we generally don't make mention of this in the article. If anything, I'd say it could possible be put under marketing, but it really isn't marketing. It may be worth a discussion, and for more eyes to see it, we could start a talk page discussion. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 15:40, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Fair enough, I wasn't sure what was usually included. I thought the best place would be (if you did include it) under marketing as anywhere else would be seen as trivia. I just thought it was interesting because (correct me if I'm wrong) it's the first time a scene from a future film was used as an end credits scene for an earlier one. Miyagawa (talk) 19:27, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * It was actually done with Iron Man 2 and Thor (the Coulson scene at Mjolnir is a variation of a daily shot for Thor). And looking at Thor, it is mentioned in the marketing section there. So in that case I don't see a reason why we can't here. :) We have sources on the Ant-Man page, but there may be better ones out there for Civil War's purposes. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 22:54, 29 July 2015 (UTC)