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Caroline Todd (Television character)
I am concerned about the way this article is written. Whilst the article is referenced and has no problems with images (as far as I know), I believe the way I have approached this article is all wrong. Comparing it to articles such as Homer Simpson and Troy McClure, I notice there articles are much shorter and more comprehensive. I'm beginning to wonder if the article needs a whole re-write, or if the article is fine as it is and I'm worrying for no reason. I hope to get the article up to GA once all the potential problems have been resolved.

Thanks,

ISD 14:17, 13 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 00:21, 15 September 2007 (UTC)

I haven't seen the show. I think the article gives a fine overview and is an appropriate length for a character with such a complex history. "Her left hand goes magnetic" needs to be explained. VisitorTalk 16:57, 17 September 2007 (UTC)