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Caulfield Grammar School
This article is entirely my work, and I'm looking for comments on how I could improve it. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks. Harro5 08:31, Apr 24, 2005 (UTC)
 * Some of the paragraphs are a tad on the long side, but otherwise it appears fine to me. &mdash; RJH 19:19, 28 Apr 2005 (UTC)