Wikipedia:Peer review/Cell nucleus/archive1

Cell nucleus
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cell_nucleus

Please comment. Nb. there are 2 more images coming (one of the nuclear pore, and one (hopefully) of a stained cell). Also re. the to do list on the talk page, these are nitty gritty things, and in truth not vital to the article, even (dare I say) a FA.ShaiM 13:54, 2 October 2006 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be expanded into a comprehensive summary of the entire article, per WP:LEAD. -Fsotrain09 15:12, 5 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I'll have a look at this in more detail later, but a first impression is that the organisation of the article is not as clear as it could be. I suggest dividing the existing sections into major categories (bolded). And then into sub-categories i.e.


 * Structure
 * Structural sub-categories. Good as it is. But include organisation of chromosomes hetero/euchromatin into this section.
 * Function
 * Role in cell compartmentation
 * Transcription
 * Dynamics and regulation
 * Nuclear transport
 * Assembly and disassembly
 * Anucleated and polynucleated cells
 * Evolution of the nucleus

TimVickers 16:46, 5 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 15:52, 17 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I've restructured per recommendation. I'll try and start working on the lead in a day or so.ShaiM 04:55, 7 October 2006 (UTC)