Wikipedia:Peer review/Ceremonies of ancient greece/archive1

Ceremonies of ancient greece
I've listed this article for peer review because it is my first wikipedia page. I am doing it for a university project and would greatly appreciate pointers on how to improve the article. I already have certain ideas about where to expand it into new topics so i'm looking more for ways to improve the writing and presentation etc. or possible mistakes i might have made.

Thanks, Drakmonde