Wikipedia:Peer review/Characters in Lone Wolf series/archive1

Characters in Lone Wolf series
I was wondering, after I had to collapse all of my articles into this one, what does this article need to get to GA status? Judgesurreal777 23:50, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Your referencing is bizarre. Some sections are littered with citations, and some don't have any. You might want to correct that. Also, maybe expand your lead section to give a little more background to the world in which your chracters live. Dev920 20:02, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

Overall article feels very pasted together currently, really needs some work to get it encyclopediay. --zippedmartin 14:11, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Many people swear by Manual of Style (writing about fiction).
 * Images claimed under fair use should state who the copyright holder is, and ideally the artist too.
 * No secondary sources, and only one thing that's not the gamebooks themselves.
 * The lead section needs to be a better introduction to the subject.
 * Use Project Aon links?
 * The use of the succession box is a bit... weird.
 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 14:56, 14 October 2006 (UTC)