Wikipedia:Peer review/Characters of Eureka Seven/archive1

General Concern With This Article
In an attempt to put my English degree to good use, I decided to undertake a project of editing the grammar, punctuation, and consistency mistakes that plague this article. In editing the "Renton" section, I realized a major flaw with the entire article--too much information. The purpose of a character description page is to give a descriptive overview of necessary background information about the characters in a play, novel, movie, story, etc. This article gives far too much information about the story, and many of the descriptions are mere condensed and regurgitated versons of the Eureka Seven plot, tailored to include the characters. This is already satisfied by the Plot Summary of Eureka Seven (anime) article. This article needs to be stripped of so much plot detail and stick to character background information. I vote that this article be altered. Please weigh in with your thoughts. -- Blueshango 08:08, 3 December 2006 (UTC)