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Characters of Final Fantasy X and X-2
I've listed this article for peer review because I am interested in making this GA or FA status and to update it like the Characters of Final Fantasy XII article and I have been interested in helping out. I have requested it for copyediting at WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Requests. Any suggestions on improving this would be appreciated for GA status and even FA status and for our WikiProject Final Fantasy. Greg Jones II 22:43, 6 December 2007 (UTC) (May the force be with you...)


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 * Where do I start? Expand reception using reviews of the game. Perhaps you could mention the GameFAQs character contests. The article desperately needs images, perhaps just a cutscene screenshot with all of the characters. I think you should defy whoever said not to include images identifying characters - it's not a policy or guideline, and it's perfectly fair under fair use laws. --Teggles (talk) 08:23, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

a little to deatailed...
I found the information so detailed and complete that it is incredibly long. I think that you need to do some editing and comdensing to shorted the length. Also the information was very overwhelming...Historybuffc13 (talk) 02:02, 24 January 2008 (UTC)