Wikipedia:Peer review/Chennai Super Kings/archive1

Chennai Super Kings
This peer review discussion has been closed. I am listing this for a PR because we (WikiProject Indian Premier League) want it to reach GA status. Thank you. Dipankan ( Have a chat? ) 10:18, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Dipankan  ( Have a chat? ) 10:18, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

See my comments at the Good article review. If you have any questions or want further input, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page.  Harrias  talk 10:53, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 19:22, 2 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lead should be three paras, see WP:LEAD.
 * Consider restricting the table of contents to just the second heading level.
 * " as CSK[2])" put ref outside parenthesis.
 * "Mahendra Singh Dhoni [4] " don't have spaces between text and refs.
 * " Chennai right next to beach" this isn't grammatically correct in English. "the beach" would be better, but really, is it significant enough for the lead about the cricket team?
 * "Chennai Super Kings (CSK) is the most successful team" you've already abbreviated the team name.
 * Don't overlink IPL.
 * Check "singh" in the infobox for capitals.
 * 3-year -> three-year.
 * Lots of cricket jargon without linking, this will be inaccessible to normal readers.
 * Batting average, bowling average etc, all need links.
 * What does * mean?
 * Really, you need a non-cricket reader to look at this (I get it but others wouldn't, so keep the PR open until you get a non-cricket fan review!)
 * "skipper Dhoni's blistering innings" be careful not to become like a tabloid paper
 * Don't use bold for emphasis in the table per WP:BADEMPHASIS.
 * Dhoni's salary is referenced but where are all the other's?
 * Where is the player list referenced?
 * Fixtures and results section is unreferenced as well.
 * IPL season, check sorting, it doesn't work at all.
 * Tables with a "Total" row, that row should always be at the bottom despite sorting.
 * Make sure all references have as many fields as possible, as a minimum publisher, access date, title, author (where available), date of publication (where available) etc.