Wikipedia:Peer review/Chris Rock–Will Smith slapping incident/archive1

Will Smith–Chris Rock slapping incident


I've listed this article for peer review because I think it is close to GA status, but would like to know what can be improved before starting a GAN.

Thanks, Skyshifter   talk  10:40, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * "Reactions from celebrities were divided." Needs a citation
 * Removed. Skyshifter   talk  00:16, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Web sources should have access dates
 * Suggest archiving sources with IABot
 * Done. Skyshifter   talk  22:46, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
 * "Segal, Edward." Per WP:FORBESCON this is not considered a reliable source.
 * Removed. Skyshifter   talk  00:16, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * YouTube sources should include who posted the video.
 * Done. Skyshifter   talk  22:46, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 15:39, 22 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I saw your message just now. I'll review the suggestions soon. Skyshifter   talk  17:32, 30 June 2023 (UTC)

Comment from TechnoSquirrel69
I'm not sure the [sic] in "Keep my wife's name out your [sic] fucking mouth!" is warranted. Many varieties of English — including African-American English — feature the removal of of after prepositions. Off the top of my head, two common ones that I can think of are after out (obviously), and off, the way I used it at the beginning of this sentence! Alternatively, "Get off (of) my lawn!" is a memorable example. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 10:36, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Removed. Skyshifter   talk  22:25, 24 July 2023 (UTC)